A sweet poem very breif and to the point. Something you could do would use all the senses of a person so they can really get the full picture of the scene the more you describe the better the more the reader will want to be a part of the piece. Keep in mind this is a full body experence not just sight or sound Plot121...

Wow!!!!!! i guess i feel the that christmas is now coming hehe but here in my place its not like that! and i think ur p;ace is really nice to spend christmas.. great portraying it hun... 5/5

Nice poem. As I read it, I was able to picture it all in my head, with all the bright lights and decorations. I like how this poem brought out the joyous feelings in the air during the holidays. Good use of imagery. Good work =)