Wow. i loved this. brilliant. good flow, diction amazing. and relatable. amazing.
--aprilsconspiracy

Wow this poem was really powerful and your words were just amazing. they were truly haunting yet so beautiful in their own tragic way. i could really relate to this poem due to a personal situation. this was one of those poems where no matter who they can relate to your poem from their own personal aspects. great job, keep it up!!! 5/5

That's absolutely fantastic.
5/5

Awesome poem. So deep. Such pain in every word. Loved it. Well written just like always. Heart wrenching.

Awesome piece. I liked how much thought, passion and emotion you put into this piece. Very well written, 5/5. Em x