Comments : Lie...

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Love, i hate the valentine hearts that people put out that resemble hapiness when its the coarsed true hearts inside that represent sadness that everyone ignores, i really liked your poem and the ending was something i could picture.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Again Shellaine a terribly sad poem , i so wish i was closer, to help you. Iliked your poem but i must admit the last few including this one is seriously starting to scare me.

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by real eyes realize real lies

    WOW i really like this poem ur words always touch me