Comments : Sorrow

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This poem is like a short story that tells how sad is that girl..

    "cutting was a cry for help,
    a way in which to save herself"

    Those lines touched me bcoz I believe in that the pain of cutting heals the pain of the heart besides it's a way to scream out loud to be heard by others..
    Great job Shellaine..Keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Shellaine plz listen to a silly comment like that girl you need help not encourgament to keep hurting yourself , I know someone close to you to whom you can speak let me know

    Grant