This is an incredible poem, that shows the feeling like black and wihte. thank you for producing such a thing. But remember somethhing so ugly could never have made something so beautiful

WOW! You are so talented that every time I read your poem I feel mesmerised an in awe of the way you can so easily portray what you feel.

This poem was just amazing straight from the start right until the end. I can find no flaws nor do I wish to. 5/5 from me.

Really a good poem. Honestly speaking! Very good first stanza and the last stanza is also fantastic! You've written a emotionally very strong poem. Well done!