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The first stanza really drew me in. I love lewdness!! The poems is dripping with sexuality...but not in an over the top way....very understated and very well under control.

another good one!!

Wonderful writing here. Great lines, and feelings. I really liked this. Should've found you a long time ago.

I like your poems. The essence of a good poem (for me) is to make the reader flex their mental capacity while stretching there imagination, take one outside the square, a (almost) window inside the poet, a personal refection...... for me, this is what a poet seeks to achieve, though maybe not consciously. Well done with this one!

Loved the strong narrative which was softened by rhythm and meter, I like the style you write in, a very enjoyable read

Nick

Man!... you write with such aggressive subtleness i began to have dreams about you.

I like it and I think you did a great job expressing yourself with the words you chose. Great job - I look forward to more.