Short and simple. But powerful and full of emotion. I like this piece. :] 5/5

Your poems really are a marvel, Melissa. You're such an excellent writer. Intelligence combined with artistry makes for a true poet

I like it and I think you did a great job expressing yourself with the words you chose. Great job - I look forward to more.

Man!... you write with such aggressive subtleness i began to have dreams about you.

I like your poems. The essence of a good poem (for me) is to make the reader flex their mental capacity while stretching there imagination, take one outside the square, a (almost) window inside the poet, a personal refection...... for me, this is what a poet seeks to achieve, though maybe not consciously. Well done with this one!

Loved the strong narrative which was softened by rhythm and meter, I like the style you write in, a very enjoyable read

Nick

Wonderful writing here. Great lines, and feelings. I really liked this. Should've found you a long time ago.

The first stanza really drew me in. I love lewdness!! The poems is dripping with sexuality...but not in an over the top way....very understated and very well under control.

another good one!!