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  • 16 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    Wow !
    great poem !
    and i loved the ending, you are definetly one talented poet.
    5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nanita

    I really like dis one.. it flows really well..
    5/5 keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    I love it! the emotions and the heart put into this poem is great. I feel like this poem really reaches out to me, i can relate so well.
    My fav part was this

    "As I try to hide the fact that you leave me breathless with the words you say."

    I love it

    Great work.