This would be really good at a poetry slam :)

I really like it!
its long, i don kno if i could go on rhymin that long!
but yea, urs is real too, i think a lot of people can relate to this or could at one point in their life, i kno i been there!
but it flows good and i like the way its written! very good!

Alot would be able to relate to this
the flow in it is well too, keep writing

Damn that shit was straight it was coo... damn girl keep up your shit

ShortyLiz