Ohh yaaay, I'm so glad that you are trying new forms of poetry that you haven't before. It's always nice to see how well one can write formed poetry, so I was really excited to read this poem!

"In your memories you will find me."
`Wonderful line! I loved how it was one of the lines that had to be repeated for this form. I thought it was the best line of the entire poem. :]

Overall, amazing work. The last stanza blew me away, and left me with a good lasting impression. It really made me love the poem that much more for some reason. The form you used was probably one of the best suitable forms for this poem, I'm very glad you chose it, however . . . A nice explanation would have been nice as to what the rhyme scheme was. Although, if you pay attention as a reader you can easily figure it out.. but anyways, its always nice to inform your readers on that kinda stuff. Anywhooo, you did a fabulous job. I adored this write. Well done. 5/5. Keep it up :]

Yeah, this was a good poem, I loved it. 'Nuff said. =)