Hi there your poem is just lovely although it sort of leaves one with a lump in the throat because you sound so lost and lonely,nice write

Grant

Wow. This one really hit home for me, i can really relate to this piece. I think it's one of your best so far. It flowed well and your wording was so simply put, yet to powerful, and emotional. I really loved htis one. Keep it up. 5/5

5/5. Great job with the consistency of the flow with this one. Also, you kept the rhyme from start to finish. Amazing job young poet