Comments : Last Moments

  • 16 years ago

    by david hollas

    Nice writing

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Lovely poem!
    I liked the force of it from the beggining. although the end does fade a little... it didn't have as much as an impact as the beggining, but other than that your choice of words was wwonderful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    Wow... very poweful...But very nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    Wow... very poweful...But very nice.