"Entwined in time,
From spark to flame,
Burning embers,
We became."

Wonderful rhyming and word choice, very sweet..

"Warmth,
Until the end of days,
Lost inside,
Your tender gaze."

Simple yet so beautiful, I really liked the descriptions in this poem, so good work! Keep writing, always and forever...

You have proven it does not take a large amount of words to reach into a readers heart and tug at the strings.
Beautifully woven with words from the heart's pen.
The flow was smooth and flowed like silk.

Excellent read!
Luanne