Mr. Right

by Hannah   Sep 23, 2008


Mr. right I'm calling you,
my heart is broken,
please pick those pieces for me,
that seems its unable to mend,
some are missing,
don't know where to find,
I've searched everywhere,
it hurts, nowhere to find
now, my heart is bleeding,
my heart is aching,
my heart needs to ease,
i think your the only one,
who take away all this pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Very Cute and well writen :)

    some are missing,
    don't know where to find,
    I've searched everywhere,

    great metaphor, I think it represents looking to try and heal after heartbreak, you have been looking everywhere for a way to get over the heartbreak. and about some are missing, you have found ways to mend parts of the heartbreak, you've taken some steps but you want to mend all of your heart :)

    well done :) Love it

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