Your Ideal

by Ignoris   Sep 23, 2008


Just shut the hell up
And just go away
I don't want to hear
What you have to say

Just let me decide
What I know is best
And then you can take
The whole of the rest

Just stop, let me think
A thought of my own
I just want a voice
Not words turned to stone

Just stop telling me
How now I should feel
That version of truth
Is just your ideal

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  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I love to read a poem that the emotion is so very evident...Very well done. You can hear just a touch of anger and frustration. Very well put together. Flow and rhythm was great!

    Now as a mom I have to say...I know it is frustrating wanting independence but you are young and even though it is hard to see it right now you need guidance. communication is the key! good luck.

  • 16 years ago

    by thehangman

    I know what you mean. Some times you just wish everyone would leave you be and let you decide things for your self.

    Keep up the great writing!

    -Andrew

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