More (rap)

This is a song we wrote for fun. And yes this time, I gave a beat! Now here is the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aDv3mFSR2FY&feature=related

Enjoy!

Harlea-

pacing back and forth behind the stage
rising like an animal traped in a cage.
rappers from da hood start makin there way
no one in the crowd dare will begin to sway!
steppin up to the mic without a single fright
me and DJ gonna make marks tonight!
crowd goes quiet; its only the beginnin
no dumb chick is standin up here singin.
now its our turn to amaze the crowd
music blastin, we rappin; nothin can stop us now!
crowd goes wild; screamin our names
this isnt even mild!so lemme get DJ to speak fame.

Mine-

Whats up peeps, bet you've heard my name!
Here it goes again! Back to the same game!
Everything stays, yet nothing's parallel,
I've surpassed everything, even the schools expel!
I'm about to unleash, somethin you might not know,
And all of these rhymes in one fashion show!
Pashion is a cravin, wavin at me,
Sayin "Ha! Man, is that the best you can be?!"
Me, personally, yeah its yet to reach,
My top potential, it's yet to breach.
Screach in my ear, try to send more fear,
But you are far away from close or near!
Usually, I leave yall hangin wit no beat,
But today I sat and wrote out this entire sheet!
Treat this rhyme however you really want,
But in the end, Im givin out the taunt!
Hauntin these rhymes, invested with me,
I promised my all, and thats what you see!
Now hold on, Im gonna sing A single hook,
Just to see what shows are mine to book.

It's the one, two, three, and to four and five,
Here I go again man! Its what I thrive!
Be prepared for what I got in store,
Cause trust me man! There's a whole lot more!

Im ready anyday for a real rattler battle,
Just to have fun, or see who has more cattle.
Either way it doesnt matter, this is all my career,
I have fun singin with this my dear!
Aggression usually takes over my emotion,
But now thats over, its turned to corrosion!
Explosion, BOOM! Is what I heard,
When I completed this song, with one last word.
Now I'm almost done, lets rap this up,
This beat is filled completely, almost top of the cup.
There is one thing left that I'd like to say,
I enjoyed this song. Sincerely DJ

*Enjoy!*