by ledane Sep 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Pain agony feel loves wrath |
by HidinVictim
Hmmm pretty good, i would like to see this in stanzas but still very good, the flow was great and i loved the first line, also you might try a different title one that isn't so umm obvious but stilll 5/5 good job |