Bittersweet

by ledane   Sep 23, 2008


Pain agony feel loves wrath
sometimes good other times a blood bath
it will caress your heart
and lift you up
and without warning
it will make your life suck
rip out your soul
and leave you empty inside
down deep within
darkness only to hide
misery discomfort
thats what it will leave
after it wakes you
from its lucid dream
it is the master of all our doins
takes us to the top, leaves us in ruins
it is good it is bad
no ones knows just why
it can make you smile and laugh
but most of the time sit and cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm pretty good, i would like to see this in stanzas but still very good, the flow was great and i loved the first line, also you might try a different title one that isn't so umm obvious but stilll 5/5 good job

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