by ledane Sep 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I see your smile |
by HidinVictim
I really like this one, wow wish i would have read it about a week ago this piece would have helped me alot, anyway i think your writing about somthing that alot of poeple can relate to, and something that everyone will one day feel. very good, your flow was good maybe a little forced but still good, and the wording was simple but still filled with alot of emotion good job... 5/5 |