Sad, but written so sweetly.
I really enjoyed this, nice job.
Chin up, Eleni

Awww....such a sad poem, Deana!
the way you described it, I could see the poor animal in front of me...
A very beautiful poem indeed:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Deana I read and then I re-read this piece and upon the second reading I found there to be a much deeper meaning behind this piece.

I think in not only represents the bird but every living thing .... animal, human ect .... so much meaning between the lines as well.

Excellent read Deana
Touching!

Beautiful...great rhyming...reminded me so much of i know why the caged bird sings!!!(a poem which i LOVE!!!)

Different people can interpret this poem differently. It has a deep and sensitive meaning behind it. Wonderfully written. Flow and rhyme both are very good. Beautiful poem!

Wow wht a good lil poem. sad but nice. very well written 5/5.

Ah, deep, but slightly sad. it reminds me of my poem "song bird," assuming i was correct in interpreting the bird as a metaphor for live and living. well done :)

You've really captured the sense of longing and sadness in a few, simple words. Very effective and affecting