Leah

by ledane   Sep 24, 2008


I have hurt so many people
and it hurts the most
as i see my little girl
and to her i feel like a ghost
she seems to shutdown
and not want to talk to me
all i got for her is love
and this is my dark reality
i love her more than
the air i breathe in
i would die tonite for her
if she would just smile again
she means the world to me
and i have let her down
and it really makes me cry
knowing i caused the frown
please my baby, forgive me
for i never meant to cause you pain
i never wanted to hurt you
and i wish if could stop the rain
i promise with all my heart
that i love you more each day
and i am truly sorry
is all i can say.............

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  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Very heartfull:)

  • 16 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Aw, this is a very emotional piece. the main idea of it was terrific, i loved it, and although in your profile you say your no poet, i disagree.. this is a very nice poem.

    im going to give this a 4. before you think "oh she just said it was great and now shes not giving it a 5" let me explain.

    yes, i liked your poem.. but it could have been better had you put a little more into it.
    some rhymes you used are a bit cliche and kind of ruin the mood- so maybe try to bring more of your own originally into the piece.
    In some places the flow was off and at some points i wasnt sure if i should read it as a free verse or a rhyming poem..
    so those are just a few things to think about.. im sure my poems arent perfect either. but this is just my honest opinion.

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