Wow this is beyond amazing... I really don't know what to say... but i needed a dictionary to look up: Nonchalance i had no clue what that ment, still this sis an amazing piece very hmmm well it seemed a bit angry to me you know the wording and the form you used in the stanzas i don't know maybe im just an angry person still what ever the emotion you ment this piece was wonderful great great job.... wish i could give it a higher rating than 5 but i cant so 5/5 for you