Two Gun Shots

by Krissymkitty   Sep 24, 2008


Two gun shots
To the head
The child shouts
And runs out of bed

The killer soars
Out the door
To leave the child
With her mothers corpse

The six year old girl
Runs into the room
Shaking her moms body
Shouting "wake up mommy; wake up!"

The dead body
Lies on the bed
The girl runs to the phone
To call her dad

No one answers
So she calls 911
Goes back with her mommy
As she hears the sirens come

They cover up the body
And carefully question the girl
As they search the house
For a 9 caliber gun

They find the gun
Three days later
And caught the guy
Who pulled the trigger

The little girl screamed and cried aloud
As they brought in the guy
She cried:
"That's my daddy!"

Ten years later
She tells her story
Of a memory
That is horrid

Blood and fluid
All over the walls
The last memory of her mom
Mutilated and deformed

Her dad in jail
For life without parole
She only prays
That this is the end
Of her horrid story...

...Please vote and/or comment...thanks...

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  • 16 years ago

    by TiffanyTrippout

    Wow, that got kind of twisted, bravo.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    Thank you...my friends mother is dieing of cancer and sad to say she'll probably go soon because she basically has every kind of cancer that u can think of...i got my inspiration(is that the word i want to use?) from her and from other stories i heard and decided to put them together (even tho her mom is going to b murdered or anything just a thought that got me thinking about what it would b like to hav to go thro that would just be horrid) im sorry about ur friends mom...
    ~EveryonesReject~

  • 16 years ago

    by shawna

    Had a friend that went thru that and i knew and loved her mother just like she was mine....this poem was touchn.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxYour broken angelxxX

    Wow that was deep!awesome poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fantasy

    Awee, this poem is so sad. it seriously wants to make me cry, i dont want to give it away, but i know what its like. I really like this one. Heart-touching

    Dollfacee.