Comments : Two Gun Shots

  • 16 years ago

    by Fantasy

    Awee, this poem is so sad. it seriously wants to make me cry, i dont want to give it away, but i know what its like. I really like this one. Heart-touching

    Dollfacee.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxYour broken angelxxX

    Wow that was deep!awesome poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by shawna

    Had a friend that went thru that and i knew and loved her mother just like she was mine....this poem was touchn.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    Thank you...my friends mother is dieing of cancer and sad to say she'll probably go soon because she basically has every kind of cancer that u can think of...i got my inspiration(is that the word i want to use?) from her and from other stories i heard and decided to put them together (even tho her mom is going to b murdered or anything just a thought that got me thinking about what it would b like to hav to go thro that would just be horrid) im sorry about ur friends mom...
    ~EveryonesReject~

  • 16 years ago

    by TiffanyTrippout

    Wow, that got kind of twisted, bravo.