Comments : CHEATED

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Such tragedy
    betrayal is very painful and when it comes with best friend, it can't be more worse

    i hope they both get what they deserve for cheating over you.

    i know these words may not help you but "there are many fish in the see"

    as for the poem, i loved the way you kept referring to him by "you" and "your". it just shows the pain and anger that you feel.
    many words were used that showed real tragedy like "loser" "damn lame" and "never believed" i loved that in your poem
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Gness

    I can relate so much to this poem you wouldnt believe.
    Cheaters and liars are the curse, the needle the hand that squeezes a heart till it stops beating of what u had for someone great write though i hope these people gets what they deserve

  • 16 years ago

    by The Shadowlust Inside Me

    I'm sorry for the hurt that these ungrateful people have caused you, also I like the emotion and expressions in your poem they were used in great context.

    Great Work Keep It Up
    - Gaige -