Comments : Sunshine Through My Darkness

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    You're the sunshine through my darkness, you're my light,
    You brought the day into my constant night.
    You are my stars in my dark night sky,
    You turn off my tear valves when I start to cry.

    This was my favorite stanza within the poem it holds a lot of meaning to me for some reason it comes across as very strong. As does the rest of your poem but for some reason this one really stood out to me. I love how you've basically shown how love can change who you are in a very positive way :) this has happened to me too so I can seriously relate to this poem :)
    xxxxx Mucho love
    Roxy xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Ah, i hope things last for you. very well written, it appears to be true love. thanks for sharing!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 15 years ago

    by Unknown

    Thats such a cute poem, U speak from the heart. I love that =)