Wow, again amazing, phenominal and awesome :) I have never felt so much from someones poetry, extremly amazing :)

"Engulfed in lies, deceit, and hope
so you don't fall, I'll help you cope.
You may turn left, while I go straight
but we'll get driven back by fate."

I espeshily liked ^this stanza, it really touched me, I love to think that there are some people that you will always be drawn back to, for good reason :)

Very interesting. i really liked it. way to go.
keep it up.

Felt the need and wantin in that....great poem.. but with pure honesty igot lost a little on the flow..

"unkowgingly, to me had lent" would have sounded better to me and on last stanza i prolly would have said "i wish was still there" just sounds a more flowy to me... but again, i just write and not edit or deliberate...thanks...hook me up with another review...i am 5/5 on this one just for the theme...powerful

One thing I dint like here was the repetition of wipe each tear otherwise it could have been incredibly awesome to me. Some of the words were forced just to go with the rhyme thing. These are just the flaws I can see in this piece other than that, the way how you constructed it was great and somehow easy to read probably coz the sentences were not that long. Plus I liked the vivid image this piece was conveying. On this piece you manage to focus on just one image all throughout the poem. God Job.

Aw. This is wonderful. A beautiful dedication to your friend. Even though at the end you said that the friendship is gone, I still thought it was as great as it could have been. Your word choice was nothing short of perfect.

The only problem I found was..

"When you mess up, ill still be here
waiting around to wipe each tear.
A few wrong turns, but I'll forget
Being with you, I can't regret."

-- In the first line, "ill" should be "I'll".

I noticed nothing else that needed to be changed in any way.

Five out of five. [5/5]

``Briana