This piece was simply mesmerizing, so deep and pure. i couldn't even begin to picture writing something like this. it's one of the most creative and heartfelt pieces i've read in some time. you truly have a talent.

In a time when I am conscious of the breeze
And the shadows at my back calling me home
Beckoning me still with stolen secrets
That I dare not admit for fear they'd linger long in my own desperate darkness

i loved those lines the most. they seemed the most detailed to me. they also held alot of meaning from my view. for some reason i feel i can relate to this, and these words especially. keep up the nice work, your poem was truly beautiful. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.