Comments : A state of constant struggle

  • I know the feeling...and sometimes i wish it go away..
    Again another poem full of emotion...lost, confused, sad, pitty...

    I just love your style...it's simple and it gets to the point. you do have some spelling errors. before you submit just check for spelling...it's no big deal, but can make your beautiful poems flow flawlessly.

    Just advise you don't have to take it...=D

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    I agree another one full of emotion, its amazing how well you capture each one. love it. 5/5