To You Everything Seems In It's Place

by Saving Grace   Sep 25, 2008


Do you see this mega-wat smile, always upon my face?
Does everything seem okay, and in its perfect place?
Is there no need to worry, 'cause im not one to feel any pain..?
Would you like to read along, to see how im broken again?

You see, the only reason i smile,
Is cause to explain why im crying, would take more then a while.
And that smile you believe is always true, upon my happy face,
Unfortunatly turns to tears at night, drenching my pillow case.

You dont understand, that things at the moment really arent okay,
And i think i really need your help, not tomorrow, i need it today,
Cause its getting hard, to hide, and its hurting me to stay strong,
As everything is falling down, everything is going wrong..

I dont know how to say this, but ill give it my best shot,
The smile i wear is horribly fake, and hiding that hurts alot.
And theres somthing thats pretty big, that needs to be addressed,
I didnt want to tell you this, but im well and truly deppressed.

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  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    OMG! this is sopooo me, but only recently ive been feeling depressed & not myself but when im around the ppl i no i act the same as always so i dont have to explain all my problems..

    Very well done! Keep it up!
    *Hunny*

  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    Wow love this...i can definitely relate..i used to be the same way..always having that smile to hide behind...and nobody could ever tell i was depressed..but ive had two best friends pass away within 3 days of each other..and that taught me that life is wayy to short to be unhappy and sad all the time..u never know when ur time will be up. be thankful for all the things u have and for all the people in ur life, cause u never know when they can be taken away.. im happier now that ive learned so much..i know its pretty bad when it takes a death of someone to overcome ur own problems within urself.

    i know this is long and im sorry lol..but stay positive and everything be okay! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Donna

    Really nice poem, it was so well written and flowed so nicely. its so sad but u have to admit it in order to get over it and with people by u, u will get through it and come out stronger.

    Keep strong and never give up

    Comment my poems if u get a chance please

    x

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