So original...really cool!!!keep writing so i can keep reading;)

I like this, and the way it's written, with the short, one or two word lines, and then a longer line.
great job 5/5

No!! Don't give up!!
great poem!! its sad and full of emotions! keep fighting hun! show cancer that he has messed with the wrong person...

keep writting you have sooo much talent!!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Loved it, but i love ALL you work =P simply amazing. always going to be here for you sweetie

I agree with those commenting before me. this was very well written and you chose the right words and placed them perfectly. Nice work here.

Tonight i read some of your poems, and trust me they are really depressing..... no rhyming but the flow and emotions are too much..... nice writing.....keep up