Until i die

by resisting reason   Sep 25, 2008


I asked her to stay
So she was with me until I died
She sat next to me
And we both cried

And I remember
I didn't want to go
"I know baby"
"I know"

So she stayed
And held my hand
"I'll hold on forever"
"If I can"

"And even when you're gone
I'll still be here
Holding your hand
And drying you tears"

I keep these memories
Close to me
Because when I died
She was all I could see

But now I'm gone
And I miss her so much
I miss her voice
And I miss her touch

And although I'm not there
I'm still in her heart
I'll love her till she gets here
So we'll never be apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Holy crap, that made me cry. your pretty good at that. lol, in a good way. but ypu could easily make me cry in a bad way...i digress. i love this.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by bethany

    Good stuff. the rhyming kind of made it lose a little of its effect because rhyming usually adds that rhythm that youre basically just waiting for. but i think you pulled it off well.
    B.