Comments : For her

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Then I met you and it all changed again
    The colors of the sunrise dulled in my mind
    Suddenly eclipsed by your beauty
    The peace of the fog lost meaning in your arms

    ^^i love these lines!

  • Overall this poem is amazing, but my favorite part of this poem is the second stanza! the way you described the happiness you felt in your heart was simply beautiful!
    when i'm so happy i can't explain it, but with the choice of words you used on your second stanza it describes the days i've felt great happiness. which have been a few, but very deeply embeded in my heart..

    love your poem!!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    A truely beautiful poem, you always know how to entrap the reader. well done =)