Please dont feal hesitated about writing your own comments or reviews about my poem. This is my first poem so if you would like to give any feed back or pointers your more than welcome, i'm more than happy to read what you have to say.

Awww this is so sweet!! 5/5!!

Great poem love the rythm and sound to it.you should right more .. i would love to read more of your poems..and in my opinon this is a great first poem ....

I LoVeD It

I liked it i loved the emotion and the rhythm it was a wonderful read

Aww... this is so sweet but yet sad.. I loved it! Amazing job. 5/5

I am feeling that right now.... what a feeling! great poem. i liked it. it really related well to me. 5/5

A great read,
can relate to this at the moment.
not the best of feelings.
but you made it feel just that bit easier

good inspiration

Way too many filler words and forced rhyming!

Omg thats the best love poem ive heard in a long time

I can soo feel the meaning in the poem. gosh i really wish i could say i love you to my boyfriend cause we're both too reserved with each other that even though we've been together for nearly a year, we haven't even held hands or even say we love each other...

Hey James.... Im in a relationship with a girl Who Cant Last :( I Love her alot And Well her parents refuse to accept me so i must go into the Navy to forget.... your Poem coudn't Describe my feelings ne better. Thank yoyu for writting Such Poetry! Such a good Read.. Brang a Tear to my eyes :'( Thanks again

THIS WAS AMAZING. IT SAID WHAT I WISH I COULD SAY TO SOMEONE

What I liked most about your poem was that it had a lot of power to it. I could see that the words really meant something to you. Well done, that was beautiful =)

IT WAS SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT! ITS WAY BETTER THEN ALL OF MINE!!! YOU HAVE SOME REA TALENT!

I think this is the second time im commenting buh i re read your poem end i feel inlove once again which i didnt anticipate doing . So i just had to show my love .