Take Me

by Shannon Pyscotic   Sep 25, 2008


The end is so near
But always so far
There's no one here
Just me and my scars

I want to force my death on myself
But have so much fear
All I want to do is just rot in hell
Where souls screaming is all you hear.

I long for so
To come and take me
I need to know
Why I hate me

Why am I like this?
I just don't know
A weak girl with a week fist
Is her for you on show.

I'm bad so be critical. Don't spare my feelings, tell me what to fix please.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Well i liked this, and it flowed really well. But i think ur wording/rhyme scheme could use maybe a bit of work. But apart from that I enjoyed the read and its an awesome poem. Keep it up 4/5