Nice one... I love the emotions... aim high^^

People look into my angelic face
what they see, a mask of disgrace
eyes that sparkle what a smile
hides the hate all the while.

VERY LOVELY POEM
5/5
peace and cheers
Biya

Thanks

5/5 you have a good rhyme scheme.

Omg this poem is amazing. i mean, so many people i know can relate to it. and so can i. this is really deep. and really F*$#ing awesome. keep up the good work.
13/10
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I can feel the emotions in this poem. I live in Cincinnati, Ohio. Crime rate here is increasing as the minute pass in each day; week, month and year. I can very easily relate to the poem, for I live it; I see it and hear it.

What it's truly like to be you- you as in a person, a human being, I do not know. But I'd like to find out.

You poem speaks a book full of truth. And I liked it too much to even type out "a lot". It was great work.

And...there are a lot of errors in my comment. -.- crap!