by Obscura Sep 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I love you because you make me complete you love me all the way down to my feet you have a smile that would shame the sun you have brightened what i have become you gave me love and i can't thank you more you gave me strength to pick myself off the floor now your with me i can finally see you are the one where meant to be |
by Jessica
I really liked this, it flowed very well. if i could give any advice, i'd say that if you broke it up into separated lines it'd be easier to read. but it's really good. 5/5 |