Slow down world
I want my money back
Everything I want to be
Is everything I lack

^^ I love and hate this stanza. I can't decide which feeling is stronger. I hate that i can relate to it so well...but it's a lovely, well put stanza, jesse. nicely written. and so,so true..

This made me think of this song that's like about sleeping in or something. I don't remember and there's my pointless comment for the day.

5/5

Such a cool poem checkers..i luv it..:)