Beautiful. the imagery is good in this poem, because it's so descriptive.

The darkened street,
So threatening and dead,
My face so blank,
But thoughts circling in my head,

^^ favourite stanza. idk why, it's just.. a good way of putting things.

nice work.
5/5

I really like how you brought in so many issues into this one poem. makes you think... why so much sinning? you would think,... this world's number one religion, christianity... wouldnt ppl stop and thnk... hey... we shouldnt do this?

anyway...
great poetry, makalah.
amazing job. as always.

5/5

i loved the flow....