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by Poet on the Piano
"I can be the hand you hold When you've fallen down I can be the air your breathe To save you before you drown" Third line: "your" should be "you". Otherwise very sweet words here, and your rhyming choice is great. "I can be the rain To wash away your tears I can be your eyes So you can see clear" I love this part, very touching and heartfelt. "I can be the love Pumping in your heart And I can be the one to hold you When the world tears you apart." A great way to end this friendship poem, good work. 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...