by BloodyBrokenAngel Sep 25, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Theres now nothing left but the blood on the floor. |
by Kitten
That was a great poem the flow was very good through out but the last line gets very close to throughing of the flow but at the same time it works out very well. I'll deffinatly be reading more of your work. |
Very well written. you captured the sadness of suicide. the choice of your words were neatly put together. keep it up. you have great talent! i'm looking foward to more of your poems!! |
What a talent you are very talented geez if i could right like you i dunno what id do never ever stop writing |