What a talent you are very talented geez if i could right like you i dunno what id do never ever stop writing

100/5

great job jess x

Very well written. you captured the sadness of suicide. the choice of your words were neatly put together. keep it up. you have great talent! i'm looking foward to more of your poems!!
**Ada**
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That was a great poem the flow was very good through out but the last line gets very close to throughing of the flow but at the same time it works out very well. I'll deffinatly be reading more of your work.