Comments : Thinking ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I already got it all plan out
    buy some rope
    buy some sleeping pills
    have a car

    'plan' should be planned in this stanza

    I hate my self
    I want to be dead
    is that just plain wrong?

    my self should be myself, no space between the two

    so I not afraid to die now
    if you get me out
    I will make you regretted it

    regretted in this stanza should be regret

    overal, a great poem well written