Losing Hope

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Sep 25, 2008


I grasp my ribs tighty to hold me together,
Trying not to fall a part, no more "forever"
Vital organs bleeding, so much pain.
Hole in my chest, nothing's the same.

I gasp for air, lungs are screaming.
Eyes sqeezed shut, stop the dreaming.
Reoccuring nightmares, always on my mind.
You're in my reach ,but never mine.

Pain aches my body, head is pounding.
Your voice in my thoughts, always resounding.
Hating this brutal life, praying for sweet death.
Burning in hells flames, eternal rest.

Wrists are sliced, blood is seeping.
Eyes gone dry, no more weeping.
Love long lost, four months ago.
No more faith, losing hope.

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    U r so far the best writer that I know. U write so amazingly. Everything is so dramatic but in a good way. Maybe a better word 4 that is like very deep, vivid, powerful, heartfelt, etc. lol Take ur pic But I really love ur writing. This poem was so sad. But I loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is also amazing.
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    sooo much emotion here! loveee itt! :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Hey nice poem, it is really great the way you described such strong feelings of loss.
    I espically liked this stanza "You're in my reach ,but never mine." It describes the way I feel. Though this might seem impossible at some times but you should always remember that there is still hope no matter what.
    Nice poem again.

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