Comments : Losing Hope

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Hey nice poem, it is really great the way you described such strong feelings of loss.
    I espically liked this stanza "You're in my reach ,but never mine." It describes the way I feel. Though this might seem impossible at some times but you should always remember that there is still hope no matter what.
    Nice poem again.

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is also amazing.
    ur rlyyyy good.
    sooo much emotion here! loveee itt! :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    U r so far the best writer that I know. U write so amazingly. Everything is so dramatic but in a good way. Maybe a better word 4 that is like very deep, vivid, powerful, heartfelt, etc. lol Take ur pic But I really love ur writing. This poem was so sad. But I loved it. 5/5