W0w very good and i laughed at the

"ill miss your pee pee dance"
i hope everything goes ok
very good 5/5

Haha ya i laughed with that one too ^^! lol. thats so sweet and written simply, which is the perfect way to expres your mix of pain and good memories/wisdom. 5/5! loved it, and RIP Aby.....

Omg.. that was soo.... sad. i hope you feel better eventually, you will see her again and until then just know that she is looking down on you thinking about how proud she is of you. i can tell you loved her alot and you expressed that very well through this poem. i liked the peepee dance line. it was amusing. hope it gets easier. 5/5. ~KM~