by Marta Jun 6, 2004
category :
Internet slang /
sadness
Her eyes are swollen, |
by Anick
Really great poem! |
by Tiny Reader
Beautiful poem. One suggestion for the last line. |
by Spanish Star
Wow! You are really talented, and this poem was so heartfelt. I started crying while I read it. My sister died of cancer at a young age, so I get really touched by poems like this. Dont ever stop writing :) |
by Emma
loved it... was so sad actully made me cry....added u to favorites.....5/5 for sur.. |
:'(...its so sad. but i loved it. your writting is so beautiful. dont ever ever stop, you really have talent! |