Scars

by ledane   Sep 26, 2008


I see you from a distance
i wanna know who you are
i'm to afraid to ask you
because of all my hearts scars

i see your smile so pretty
it makes my heart skip
oh how i wish i wasn't
so closed off, emotions stripped

i think of the fun
we might have together
the laughter and joy
to make life so much better

i watch you walk away
and go to your place
as i turn and close my eyes
i still see your face

i see you from a distance
i wanna know who you are
maybe one day i can get
over my fear of these scars

until then will just
sit here and wish
and think of all the
good things that i will miss

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  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Very good;) very emotional. I feel the scars.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is good, i like theme, and i really like the imagery, or at least in my mind i could see the whole think playng out. the flow was good and your wording was great, but you might try reworking the last line in you second stanza. oh by the way, its great to see you using stanzas i think it really helped with the flow great job... 5/5 again

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