This is good, i like theme, and i really like the imagery, or at least in my mind i could see the whole think playng out. the flow was good and your wording was great, but you might try reworking the last line in you second stanza. oh by the way, its great to see you using stanzas i think it really helped with the flow great job... 5/5 again

Very good;) very emotional. I feel the scars.