How Is She MEant To Breath?

by sexyCheckers   Sep 26, 2008


With so many knives in her back
How is she meant to stand up tall?
With a rope around her throat
How is she meant to breath at all?

With so many people refusing to listen
How is she meant to seek help,
Maybe she's finally realised
That there's nothing to save herself.

With bags of bricks tied to her ankles,
How is she meant to surface for air?
With all the lonely days she spends,
How is she meant to feel like someone cares?

With people telling her it's just a phase,
How is she meant to see brighter days?
She cries when people laugh and mock her words,
And then they expect her not to hurt.

I actually like this poem of mine.....
What do you think??

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  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    I love it. its raw and real. you did a great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    I love it. its raw and real. you did a great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Compassionate and hard at the same time, there will always be those who will try to paint someones silver lining gray and I can definatly relate

  • 16 years ago

    by Caity

    I love it, rings true most days
    Keep up the poetry and hold on to your muse

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    Very very good!!!!!!!! i can relate to this as u know 5/5