Even pretty when you cry

by Max Krakers   Sep 26, 2008


Tears run down your cheeks,
Your eyes are damp and wet.
You're feeling blue inside,
But your face is almost red.

But even when you're sad,
Your eyes keep shining on.
Looking beyond the clouds,
Trying to find the sun.

Yet you seem to have forgotten,
That you yourself are light.
And even when you're crying,
You shine with all your might.

Your friends all understand,
That crying isn't bad.
We'd rather see you happy,
But we'll still like you when you're sad.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Pengu36

    Hey right back at you, lol. I used to be on here a lot but for some odd reason for got the email I used to sign up and made a new account.

    Nice poem, imo. I usually tend to follow a rhythmic pattern and also a rhyme one. I have never tried writing one like this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Oh, goodness... sounds like something i wish i could hear more often :3 your poem rlli touches d heart of whom you are speaking to...

    thank you for posting this, truly. i wish words like these could be nicely phrased more often by every human being in general... caring for and loving someone else is truly a gift to have & shud not be wasted.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melanie

    I think you did such a great job on this poem. It was really short, but it was really sweet. It brought tears to my eyes and it was a job well done.
    Melanie =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Natures Calling

    This is a great poem! I loved how deep it is.
    I especially love the part:

    "But even when you're sad,
    Your eyes keep shining on.
    Looking beyond the clouds,
    Trying to find the sun."

    Keep up the good work!

    5/5

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Max Krakers